Decision made

We need more action, we need more going wrong... its where to put and when. I have ideas and I intend to put them into practice.

Some feedback I got from an unusual source has helped ...

I was told recently its not strong enough, etc and I didnt understand but now I do. I see the weakness's and its nearly time to make it better.... then self publish it and try and get it out there and get the feedback from the buying public. 

Maybe thats the way to go .....

I dont think i can do it before september but if I aim for that then it gives me a mini deadline and I thrive on deadlines .....

Decisions Decisions

Its the time when i start to question whether to rip this apart and add more in... really make their days jam packed to the rafters or leave it as it is.

Ive left it along for about a month but I can still see the story in my minds eye and its driving me nuts cos I cant spot the gaps

I wish i could just write it and that was it ... no editing

Has to be said i think im the only person to read it all the way through

mmm that tells me something ......  not as fast and good as I thought then

Conflicted

So Ive finished editing it but someone told me today .. everything goes too well for the girls
yeah ive changed a bit so they miss a flight but catch one later but nothing major goes wrong

Maybe thats a mistake ..... mmmm food for thought

Desperately trying to edit

and make better but at a loss just now ....

Word to the wise people .... Dont edit when things aren't right !!

Finished

Woo hoo ... its finished and all chapters posted

Would love some feedback on the later chapters???

Nearing the end

Just over a week, well 9 days to my self imposed target finish date and I have about 2 and a half chapters to write, and then 4 to edit/improve.... Am I mad.

I think so.

I have the last chapter in my head, floating about and pretty much the last but one, but the one im working on just isnt flowing as quickly as I would like. Mind you the cold isnt helping .....

Whoever thought deciding what to do in rome would be this difficult. ......

Lyrics

Mmmmmmmm reply from EMI is helpful but this maybe out of my price league

1 line , just 1 line from Bohenium Rhapsody is £500

With 20 - 22 chapters that would be approx £10,000 to £11,0000
and they can refuse outright if they dont like the book
and I need a licence for each publishing arena
Ie, paperback, e book etc and its per copies

Complicated is not the word

Maybe time for a re think .......