Decision made

We need more action, we need more going wrong... its where to put and when. I have ideas and I intend to put them into practice.

Some feedback I got from an unusual source has helped ...

I was told recently its not strong enough, etc and I didnt understand but now I do. I see the weakness's and its nearly time to make it better.... then self publish it and try and get it out there and get the feedback from the buying public. 

Maybe thats the way to go .....

I dont think i can do it before september but if I aim for that then it gives me a mini deadline and I thrive on deadlines .....

Decisions Decisions

Its the time when i start to question whether to rip this apart and add more in... really make their days jam packed to the rafters or leave it as it is.

Ive left it along for about a month but I can still see the story in my minds eye and its driving me nuts cos I cant spot the gaps

I wish i could just write it and that was it ... no editing

Has to be said i think im the only person to read it all the way through

mmm that tells me something ......  not as fast and good as I thought then

Conflicted

So Ive finished editing it but someone told me today .. everything goes too well for the girls
yeah ive changed a bit so they miss a flight but catch one later but nothing major goes wrong

Maybe thats a mistake ..... mmmm food for thought